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Ch. 15 The Crusade Begins

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As Max, Hauntzor, and TJT came by the New York Harbor, they could see the magnificent Black Kitty. The wood that she was made out of was Cedar, and the fact that she has never been hit by canon balls made the wood perfect. The water has made the reddish wood a darker color. "Wow Max, you take good care of your ship." TJT said. Max blushed, "This is one of my few actual pride and joys." Hauntzor gets on the ship, remembering the journey back home from Easter Island. "Max, we need supplies." TJT said. Max turned, and nodded. They walked towards the port town and looked for sales. "There are only three of us." Max said. "But we'll be getting at least one more." TJT pointed out. Max nodded, and they continued to look for food. "Is canned food ok?" Max asked. "I dunno you're the captain." TJT said. Max shrugged and bought canned fruit. Hauntzor got water bottles and a water purifier and TJT got the meat. The three loaded the ship, and started to head out. "When does school start?" Max asked TJT. "Sometime in September." TJT answered. Max looks at the calendar; it was the ending of August. "I know, we better hurry up." TJT stated. Max transformed into Captain Krax, set the sails, and they sailed towards the north east, looking for Denmark.

Rap leads the team by foot, towards Nevada. Dagger pulled out a small electronic map, programmed like the super computer in the base under the school, to see how they were doing. "The enemy base is losing people." Dagger said. "Are you sure?" Rap snapped back. Dagger nodded. "Show me the map." Rap demanded. Dagger handed him the map, and slowly walked away. Rap looked at the map for a long time before he talked again. "They seem to be moving towards different areas..." Rap said aloud. Yoshils stepped forward, "I say we split now, and hunt them separately." The rest of the army agreed. "Very well, Yoshils, you and your Mafia head towards Utah, a fairly large outpost there, Dagger and Bacpac Boy continue towards Nevada, Tasha, Sara, and Miracle Misha head towards where Denver used to be, and Tim and I will go to New Mexico." Yoshils saluted, "Where shall we meet again?" Rap thought for a moment, "Back at DA." Yoshils nodded, and his Mafia was continued to walk towards Utah. Tasha looked at Miracle Misha, and nodded, and the two started to run towards Denver, with Sara following close behind. When Rap turned to look at Dagger and Bacpac Boy, the two were gone. "Let's go Tim; we have the largest distance to cover." Tim nodded, and the two boarded their extreme gear and sped at high speeds towards New Mexico.

Yoshils walked quietly towards the outpost. "Yoshils, it's surrounded by a moat." Four said. "The moat enters the building though, correct?" Yoshils demanded. Four nodded. Yoshils sighed, "Rap said this place was large, but I didn't expect it to be this large." Four nods, "Just like the good days... right?" Yoshils laughs, and turns to Four. "You always know how to put a smile on my face." Yoshils said. Four smiles, "It's good for you." One walked up, "Sir scans show large enemy operations on all floors of the base, but especially on the ground floor." Yoshils stares at the building for a while. It had a total of eight floors, excluding the ground floor, if the scans were correct, then the enemy was expecting an invasion. "Yoshils?" Two asked. Yoshils jumped and turned, "What?" "I have an idea." Two claimed. Two grabbed a stick, and drew the building in the dirt. "If the scans turn to be true, then we will have a hard time disabling the back up mechanism." Two said. Back up mechanism? If that were to go off... Yoshils thought. "Good thing it's on the top floor." Two said. "So what do we do?" Yoshils asked. Two drew where the back up mechanism was, "We send most of the Mafia up there, to disable it, and divert the enemy forces up to the top floor." Two said. Yoshils nodded, "Looks right to me." "I think, Four, One, you and I should float into the base, we'll trap them." Two said. "Alright, let's go." Yoshils said. Yoshils gave most of his Mafia grappling hooks and told them what to do. "We'll do our best to take out enemies aiming for your ropes." Yoshils said. The Mafia members nodded, and started to climb the building. Two pulled out a sniper rifle, and shot the Monk-Keys trying to shoot the helpless Mafia members. "Enemies are climbing towards the top!" One yelled. "Enter the building!" Yoshils shouted. Yoshils dragged out his raft, which could carry three people. "Yoshils, take me and my turret first, we'll need it." Four claimed. Yoshils nods, and helps Four carry the turret onto the raft. They floated into the building, and unloaded the turret. "I hope you can stand alone for a few minutes." Yoshils stated. Four nodded, and started to set up the turret. "You." a voice said, and Four lifted his head. What Four saw was a human wearing jeans, and suspenders. No shirt was seen. In his hand was a large shotgun, and it was obvious that he had worked out. "Who are you?" Four asked. The person laughed, and walked up to Fours turret. "You think that this can defeat me?" the person asked. The person stomped the turret, and the whole thing broke down. Four pulled out his pistol, and pointed it at the person. The person laughed, "You don't trust me?" Four slowly moved his finger onto the trigger, "Tell me who you are." "You don't remember me?" the person asked. "What do you mean?" Four demanded. "How many Mafia members went with Max to help him?" the person asked. "Five." Four said. "Wrong!" The person said. Four stepped back, finger tense on the trigger. "There were SIX Mafia members who went with Max." the person said. "Six!" Four yelled. "Now you remember." Six said. At the Yoshils, One, and Two came in. "Ah, the family is back." Six said. "What has Zomus done to you?" Four asked. "He's made me better." Six claimed.

Tasha, Miracle Misha, and Sara got to Denver by nightfall. "What happened?" Tasha asked. "It was burned down..." Miracle Misha said. "Recently." Sara finished. In the middle of the ashes was a small building, the lights could be seen far away. "That is the outpost." Sara said. The other two nodded. I sense Hooblahs, not many, but that's the most complex monster there. Dimitri said. "The hardest monster there is Hooblahs, so I think this will be Monk-Key infested, and Dire Wolf infested." Miracle Misha said. Tasha nodded, "What are we waiting for." Tasha unsheathes her sword, and runs towards the building. Miracle Misha smiled, "Our little timid Jumal has become a brave warrior." Sara laughs, "Indeed." The two chase after her. The three get into the building, and all the see is a single hallway. Mish, I'm sensing Blackheart... Dimitri said. "This isn't a hiding place..." Tasha said. "It's a lab." Sara completed. Tasha shuddered; the last lab they had gone too was infested with Zydriis. "It's probably making those Dire Wolves and Monk-Keys stronger." Miracle Misha said. "Well let's stop them!" Sara said, grabbed her guns, and started running down the hallway. "Sara... Wait!" Miracle Misha exclaimed. She started to chase after her. Tasha tightens her grip on her sword, and follows. The three break through the door, and see Blackheart casting magic on a Monk-Key. Sara got ready to shot the Monk-Key when Miracle Misha stopped her. "What?" Sara whispered. "Let it go, attack Blackheart." Miracle Misha replied. Sara shot two bullets at Blackheart, and at that moment, Tasha had casted Pink Magic on the witch as well. "H-hey!" Blackheart yelled. "Tasha and Sara take out the enemies, leave me here with Blackheart." Tasha nods, and drags Sara through the doors on the other side. In the room the two were currently in was basically the same as the last, but it was loaded with monsters. Tasha lifts her sword and says a spell under her breath which casts fire onto the blade. "Ready?" Tasha asked. Sara nods. The two run into the hoard of monsters, shooting and slicing everything that attempted to attack them. When the room had emptied Sara looked at Tasha, and the two laughed. "That was fun!" Tasha said. They turned, and saw a garage like door. "Uh... Tash, I don't think we're done yet..." Sara said. Lights starting flashing red, and the door opened up, slowly. When it was opened, more Dire Wolves, Monk-Keys, and Hooblahs came running out. "Here we go!" Sara yelled. When she pulled the trigger nothing happened. "Uh-oh..." Sara said. "Use your saber!" Tasha said, and ran towards the monsters. She hacked through them, leaving nothing alive. When she looked back, Sara was surrounded by Dire Wolves. "... Super... NOVA!!" Tasha yelled, and exploded four times, each time bigger than the last. Sara ran to Tasha, barely scratched by the spell. "Tash, you ok?" Tash nodded slowly, "I'm... Fine." Sara looked at her, "I hope Misha hurries up..."

Miracle Misha raised her staff, "Leave." Blackheart laughs, and lifts her hand, "Do you know what will happen if I touch you?" Miracle Misha nodded, "Total destruction." Irtimid... Dimitri said. Dimitri... Irtimid said. Blackheart flew towards Miracle Misha with the sole intent on touching her. Miracle Misha teleported behind Blackheart and cast a muscle bounding spell. "What are you doing!" Blackheart demanded. "Seeing who you really are..." Miracle Misha said. She lifted Irtimid of Blackheart's head. "NO!" Blackheart yelled. She slowly changed into a zombie-like person. "Bastran." Miracle Misha said. Blackheart didn't say anything. "What kind of magic is this?" Miracle Misha asked. Irtimid fell back onto Blackheart's head. Blackheart laughs, "You've figured me out." Miracle Misha shakes her head, "No, that was just some type of magic Irtimid did." Blackheart laughs again, "Think all you want, but sooner or later you'll have to face the truth." Miracle Misha lifts her staff, "Bye Blackheart." Blackheart laughs, "For now." Miracle Misha casts a teleportation spell, and Blackheart vanished. She turns and enters the room Sara and Tasha were. Miracle Misha sees Sara holding Tasha, and sprints over there. "Miracle!" Sara exclaims. Miracle Misha looks at Tasha, and nods. Spell exhaustion, we can saver her... This time. Dimitri said. Miracle Misha nods, and heals Tasha. "Thanks Misha, you know how to make miracles." Tasha said. Sara laughs. "What?" Miracle Misha asked. She just used your name as a pun. Dimitri said. Miracle Misha looks up, "A pun?" If I had hands, I would slap my forehead; a pun is a play on words. Dimitri explained. "I see." Miracle Misha said. "We're heading back to DA then, right?" Tasha asked. Sara shook her head, "We're going to help patrol the seas." Miracle Misha shrugs, "Whatever floats your boat." Miracle! You made a pun! Dimitri exclaimed. Sara laughs, "Nice pun." They three leave the base, and start towards Texas. "Wait." Tasha said, and turned. Don't let her cast any magic! Dimitri yelled. Miracle Misha casted an explosion spell before Tasha could. "Hey!" Tasha yelled. "You almost died, don't over do it." Miracle Misha said. "I think we should wait here." Tasha said. "They may need us, and being that far away may be the difference of life or death." Miracle Misha said. Sara pauses, and looks at them. "Alright, we'll stay here." Sara said. Tasha sits down, "Good, I'm tired."

Dagger and Bacpac Boy made it to Nevada by the sunrise of the following day. Dagger checks his map, and sees how much smaller the base has gotten. "Go, go, go!" Dagger yelled, and the two of them ran into the base. Dagger pulled out his daggers and Bacpac Boy pulled out Earthshaker. They were next to the door, waiting for some kind of sound. Dagger signaled with his hand, and the two of them opened up the door, and started blindly slashing at anything that was in front of them. When they realized there was nothing, they sprinted down the halls. The base was the size of a small house, five rooms, two bedrooms, two larger rooms, and a hidden room. Dagger and Bacpac Boy didn't find the hidden room until the end. As they split up, and entered each room, and killed the monsters quickly. Dagger went into a bedroom and found a Drakel. "YES!" Dagger cheered, and climbed on board of the Drakel, and flew into a larger room. It was full of Hooblahs, and all Dagger could do was laugh. "HOOBLAH!" They shouted, and tried to attack Dagger, but all they could do was scratch the Drakel. One Hooblah actually caught a hold of the Drakel, and pulled it down. Dagger jumped back, and attacked the Hooblahs on foot. When all of them were killed, he sees the tattered remains of his Drakel steed. "Those Hooblahs are fierce..." Dagger said. As for Bacpac Boy, he was faced with Dire Wolves and Monk-Keys. Bacpac Boy had opened a door, and fled into the larger room. In there, he just hacked through the enemies. Left and right, no matter what they were; the sword had sliced right through them. Bacpac Boy met up with Dagger when he heard movement in the adjacent room. Bacpac Boy motions to follow and the two enter the room. They see two Monk-Keys entering a hidden room. "Go." Dagger said, and threw a dagger to keep the door ajar. The two enter the room, and eavesdrop on the Monk-Keys. "Yes, I understand the lab in Denver has been destroyed, I'm planning on sending Zydriis that way tomorrow." a voice said. "Zamus, Blackheart was there, if she couldn't stop them, Zydriis won't stop them." A Monk-Key had said. "But these are stronger Zydriis, powered up by Blackheart." Zamus said. "Fine, but that doesn't explain to the trouble in Utah." A Monk-Key said. "What I've heard, some person, which was covered in armor from head to toe, had attacked, and killed all who had almost killed that Mafia." Zamus said. "But he disappeared." A different Monk-Key said. "I understand the risks, but if this thing is gone, then the Protectors of the Hydrii will suffer." Zamus said. "Where is this new base going to be?" A Monk-Key asked. At this point, Dagger got closer, he wanted to hear this. "I'll send to you in an e-mail." Zamus said. "Yes Sir!" The Monk-Keys said in unison, and logged off. "Now." Bacpac Boy whispered. The two of them entered the room and assassinated the two Monk-Keys. "Get that e-mail." Dagger said. Bacpac Boy hacked the account, and created a new password. "Alright, let's go." Bacpac Boy said, and they leave the house. Dagger looks back, and lights it on fire. "Alright, let's head back to DA." Dagger said. Bacpac Boy nods, and the two of them walk back towards DA.

The Black Kitty made it to Denmark within a good three days. Max, Hauntzor, and TJT got off, and looked at the sun; it was setting. "That is one beautiful sun set." TJT said. Max looks, and points, "Is that the green flash!" The three look, and watch the sun's last beams disappear. As it did that, a green flash burst into the air. "Davey Jones is on the prowl again." Max stated. "But he said he gave up." Hauntzor said. "He's a pirate; he always goes back on his words." Max claimed. The three walked through the streets looking for a hotel. "Two start hotel?" Max asked. No one agreed. "How about this five star hotel?" Hauntzor asked. "Uh... Sure." TJT said, and turned her back. "What does that sign say?" Max asked. "Nothing important." TJT said. "What does it say?" Hauntzor pleaded. "No." TJT stated, and walked away. "Drinking age 15." Max said. "PARTY TONIGHT!" Hauntzor said. "No." TJT said, and dragged the two of them towards the hotel. She tied them together in their hotel room. "Now, no leaving, AT ALL." TJT said, and left. "Great." Max whined. "Wait." Hauntzor said, and cut through the ropes. The two of them looked at each other, "Party tonight!" They escape through the window, and walk towards the closest pub. "Excuse me, can I have two drinks?" Max asked the bartender. "Can I see some I.D?" the bartender replied. Max handed him his school I.D, and Hauntzor handed him his I.D. "Alright." The bartender replied, and brought them their drinks. Max lifts up his cup, "Here's to the crusade against Zomus!" Hauntzor lifts his cup, "Let us be victorious!" The two downed their drinks, and quickly bought another round. From a corner, a person wearing a black overcoat, a top hat, and sun glasses silently watched the two drink their cups clean. The person called the bartender over, "I have some money, get those two some more drinks, on me." The bartender took the money, and gave Max and Hauntzor their drinks. "Who sold these to us?" Hauntzor said, pointing to a TV. "It was that guy." the bartender said, pointing to the man in the corner. "We'll have to apologize him later." Max said, and the two downed their drinks. "I think we need to home head." Hauntzor said, and laughed. He gets up, and falls down. "MAX!" Hauntzor yelled. Max stands up, "Sir Hauntzor!" "I've fallen... and I can't get up!" Hauntzor exclaims. Max walks to him, and tries to lift him up, but falls down. At that point the man in the corner stands up, and walks over to the drunken warriors. "Excuse me, I need your help with something." he said. The man lifts the two, and takes them outside. "I can't believe how easy this is." the man said. Max turns, and points, "I can't believe how easy YOUR MOM was!" Hauntzor laughs. "Hey, leave my mom out of this!" the man said. "Yeah, once you leave your butt out of this!" Hauntzor said, and Max started laughing. At that point, the man tore of his clothes, and revealed himself as a whip. "DUDE!" Hauntzor said, "This guy has something attached to his arms!" The Whip cracked a whip at Hauntzor, and barely missed. "You two are so gullible." The Whip claimed. "You sir, are stupid!" Max said. "Why is that?" The Whip asked. "Because gullible isn't eve a word!" Hauntzor said, and the two burst out laughing again. "It's not?" The Whip asked. "I's gonna shank ya!" Max claimed, and unsheathed his sword. Hauntzor pulled out his guitar sword, and started strumming really loud. "I"M WANNA ROCK!" Hauntzor yelled. "ROCK!" Max yelled back. The Whip tried to whip Max, but Max cut the whip off. "HEY!" The Whip yelled. Max stumbled forward and shouted: "Ladies and Gentlemen... Please join me in welcoming... MR. NIEL HAUNTZOR!!" Hauntzor started strumming even faster now. "STOP THAT!!" The Whip yelled. Max turned back, "I's gonna shank ya!" The Whip tried to whip Hauntzor into submission, but Max stabbed him. "YOWCH!" The Whip turned, and looked at Max. "I's gonna shank ya!" Max shouted again, and stabbed the Whip again. "ROAR!" The Whip shouted and tried to attack Max, but he tripped and fell down. "Thank you! Thank You!" Hauntzor shouted, "I'll be here all night!" Max stabbed the Whip again. "STOP THAT!" The Whip yelled. After that Hauntzor started doing a guitar bash on the Whips head, until the Whip died. "We need to home head!" Max shouted, and started to stumble back towards the hotel. "You mean home needs to head us!" Hauntzor asked exclaimed. The two burst out laughing. Max tries to stumble up the steps, but falls down. "Mr. Neil Hauntzor, I've fallen and I can't get up!" Max yelled. "Don't worry, I'll get TJT." Hauntzor said, but as he stumbled up the stairs, he fell down as well. "Mr. Maxwell, help me!" Hauntzor cried. "I would, but I'm lying on you!" Max yelled. Hauntzor gets up, and helps Max up. "Which room were we in again?" Max asked. "The one across the room of TJT's." Hauntzor answered. They get up the stairs, and see TJT. "HEY!" Max yelled, and hugged TJT. "Your my bestest buddy... EVER." Max yelled. He walks to his door, inserts his card key, let's Hauntzor, and enters. "What the..." TJT started, and then she smelt the beer. TJT opens up the door, and sees Hauntzor sleeping on top of the T.V. and Max sleeping in the bathtub. "You two are in so much trouble!" TJT yelled. Max gets out of the bathtub, and holds up a toothbrush, "I's gonna shank ya!" "What?" TJT asked. Max stabbed her with the blunt end of the toothbrush. "OWCH!" TJT yelled. She grabbed the toothbrush, stabbed Max, and broke it. She looks at Hauntzor, who was standing, looking down. "Hauntz-" TJT started, but got cut off. "I'M WANNA ROCK!" Hauntzor yelled. "ROCK!" Max yelled from the bathroom. "GO TO SLEEP!" TJT screeched and left the room. "You mean go sleep too?" Max asked, and Hauntzor burst out laughing. The next day the three of them got interviewed about the death of the Whip. Max and Hauntzor recounted as much as they could, and told them about their crusade against Zomus, and how they were looking for the Hydrii warrior. TJT answered questions that were directed to her directly; because, she wasn't at the bar the night before.

Yoshils glared at Six, "You've corrupted yourself." Six laughs, "I forgot to tell you, the names BIG Six now." Six said. "Why Big Six?" Four asked. "Because of this!" Big Six said, and lifted up his gun. Four pointed his pistol at Big Six, "I'm sorry but you're going to have to die." "Not if I can do this!" Big Six said, and cloned him three times. "Good-Bye Yoshils." Big Six said, and left. The three clones were identical in everything, size, voice tone, and weapons. All three of the clones laughed, "Good-Bye Mafia." They started to lift up their weapons when a large flash entered the room. A person covered in armor, holding a sword that wasn't even connected where it started. There were two ends too, on each side of the hilt. This being ran up, and stabbed one of the clones, pulled out a shotgun and blasted the other two. "Who are you!" Four demanded. The person didn't say anything, just saluted, and disappeared. "Hey Big Six, come back and fight us!" Yoshils yelled. Big Six turned, and saw his dead clones. "How did you..." Big Six started, but then shook his head, "Die." He ran up to them, but the being showed up again, and cut the gun in half. Big Six stepped back in shock. The gun had a sharp end now, but it wasn't as long, making its range shorter. "Who are you!" Big Six demanded. "Call me Thirteen Thirty-Seven." the person said. "Very well Thirteen Thirty-Seven, you can die!" Big Six shot his gun, but Thirteen Thirty-Seven was gone. "I'm not leaving without a single death!" Big Six yelled. He ran up to Two, stabbed him, and fired his gun. Two flew back a few feet, and Big Six ran away. Yoshils, One, and Four ran back towards Two. "Two!" One yelled. Two lifts his head and smiled. "Two," Yoshils said, "You're going to be alright." Two laughs, "Yoshils, you're the one who always says: "Don't kid yourself, kid."" Yoshils laughs, tears streaming out of his eyes. "Make sure you give Zomus what's coming for him." Two said, and he passed. Yoshils glared into the base, "BIG SIX!" Nothing. "YOU'RE GOING TO PAY!!" Yoshils yelled. The three of the remaining shadow group ran to the top floor, to help the rest of the Mafia. When they got there, the battle was one. "Time to blow this place to hell." Yoshils said. The Mafia planted bombs all over, and they left. Yoshils pressed the button, and continued to walk away. "Where to now, boss?" One of the Mafia members asked. "I guess we head back to DA." Yoshils said, and the Mafia started to walk back towards DA.

Rap and Tim got to New Mexico by the sunset of the next day after their departure. Their outpost was a small town, it didn't have a lot of enemies, but the outpost itself was made of about seven buildings. Rap pulled out his PDA, and looked at the number of enemies here. "That's strange... It's fuzzy." Rap said. "Ten." somebody said. Tim and Rap turned around. They say this old cowboy, squinting at the town. "No, twenty, that's how many Zydriis are in this village." The cowboy said. "What?" Tim said. "Best to start at the beginning and work your way in." The cowboy said. "Thank you?" Rap asked. "You just rid my town of these scum." The cowboy said, and walked away. The two turn, and look into the village. "Got any guns?" Rap asked Tim. "Nope." Tim said plainly. Rap nods, "Very well, we do this the fun way." Rap looks back him, and sees Tim is missing. "Tim?" Rap turns and sees Tim slashing through everything that moved. "Wait for me!" Rap yelled, and he cleared the fence, and jumped on top of a building. He jumps from on building to another, and attacked the Zydrii on top of that building. "Tim look out!" Rap yelled, as Zydriis attempted to ambush Tim. "TIME DESTRUCTION!!" Tim yelled, and the Zydriis shattered like glass. "How many was that?" Tim asked. "We're on fifteen now!" Rap yelled. "LET'S GET 'EM!" Tim yelled, and ran into another building. Rap smiled, and turned. "Hello lil' raptor." Zamus said.  "Zamus!" Rap screamed, and tried to attack him. Zamus grabbed Rap by the throat, "Good-bye." Zamus threw Rap off the building, and flew away. Rap fell, and looked as his mortal enemy flew away. Rap stood up; a little shaken by being thrown down. Rap picks up his sword, and chases after the rest of the Zydrii. When Rap finally caught up with Tim, all the Zydriis had been slain. "Let's find that old cowboy." Rap said. Tim nodded, and the two left the village. "Hey!" Rap yelled. The cowboy turned, "You're alive?" The two nodded. "So that means my town is safe?" he asked. Tim nodded. "Thank you!" the cowboy said. Rap waved, and started walking back to DA. "No problem sir, it's just good to help someone in need." Tim said. "I wish the world had more people like you two." the cowboy said. "It does." Tim assured, and ran to catch up with Rap.

Max, Hauntzor, and TJT were getting ready to head towards Germany when they were attacked. Max, Hauntzor, and TJT were loading their backpacks when something from the shadows attacked. Max blocked the attack, barely. Hauntzor and TJT were able to block the attack easier. "Dang you Maxwell." the shadow said. "Who are you?" TJT asked. The being walked out of the shadows, and it looked like TJT, but darker. "REA!" TJT yelled. REA turns, looks at TJT and laughs. "You're doomed." REA said, and charged TJT. TJT raises her sword, and blocks the attack. "Max and Hauntzor, go I'll catch up!" TJT said. Max looked at Hauntzor, and the two nods. They leave, and stop at a bar close by. "No drinking Max." Hauntzor said. "Yeah Haunt," Max said, "No drinking."

REA circled around TJT like a shark about to strike its prey. TJT in turn stayed stationary, waiting to see a weakness. "You never knew how to fight!" REA yelled, and tried to stab TJT. TJT quickly blocked, spun REA's sword, and cut her left cheek. "YOU LITTLE!" REA screeched. TJT sprinted forward, and jumped to the right, ducked the sword slash, and stabbed REA in the leg. "You win this time... TJT." REA growled, and disappeared into the shadows. TJT got on her Extreme Gear, and rode towards the bar. If they've been drinking... TJT thought. She went into the bar and found Max and Hauntzor sober. "Let's head out." TJT said. The three of them went out, and flew towards Germany. Little did they know that behind them was an enemy that would become the fiercest some foe that they have ever faced.

"You sure that these are the right ones?" the enemy asked through a hidden ear phone. "Yes bounty hunter, slay them all." Zomus said. "Yes sir." Bounty Hunter said. He slowly stalked the three, and waited for the right time to strike. As they crossed the boarder into Germany, Bounty Hunter decided to attack. "Max!" he yelled. Max turned, and saw the leather jacket, the worn jeans, the sunglasses, and the cowboy boots, and shuddered. "Zomus has a large bounty on your head." Bounty Hunter yelled. "Yeah? Well Zamus is hunting me." Max said. "Zamus sucks." Bounty Hunter said, and walked up to Max. "What do you want?" Max asked. "Your head!" Bounty Hunter yelled, and took Max's Crescent Moon dagger and tried to behead him with it. Very well, let's see if he knows how to fight with daggers. Max thought, and pulled out his other Crescent Moon dagger. "There are two of them?" Bounty Hunter asked. "Yeah," Max lied, "One for the waxing crescent and one for the waning crescent." Bounty Hunter looked at his weapon, and threw it at Max. Max tried to block it, but once the daggers hit, they formed together. "What!" Bounty Hunter exclaimed. Max, take the blade, with it you will become a Lunar Paladin! Kaiden said. Max grabbed the blade, and instantly he was covered in the armor of the Lunar Knight. "You want to play like that?" Bounty Hunter yelled. The armor started to fall off, making Max faster. "Bring it." Max exclaimed. Bounty Hunter unsheathed his sword and ran towards Max, full speed. "RUN!" Max yelled at Hauntzor and TJT. Max blocks the attack, and tries to hit him with an attack of his own. Bounty Hunter quickly recovered, and delivered a flurry of attacks, which Max blocked. "You're good..." Bounty Hunter said. "Watch this..." Max said, and came running at him. Bounty Hunter raises his blade, and tries to maim Max, but Max rolls, and cuts the leather jacket. "NO ONE TOUCHES THE JACKET!" Bounty Hunter yells, and chases after Max. Max tries to block his attacks, but in Bounty Hunter's rage Max's sword dropped, and he was hit with attack after attack. Max picks up his sword, and tries to block the attacks again, but he is to slow. "Fine..." Max said. Bounty Hunter smiled. "SUPER NOVA!" Max yelled, and exploded seven times each one bigger than the last. Bounty Hunter just pulls over his cape, and turns invisible. When the explosion was done, Bounty Hunter revealed himself... Not harmed. Bounty Hunter walked up to Max, smiling. "I expected more from you." Bounty Hunter said, and raised his sword. "NOT UNDER MY WATCH!" A voice yells and kicks Bounty Hunter. "Dad?" Max asks, before passing out.

Bounty Hunter stumbled back a few steps, and looked at the new Jumal standing in front of Max. "You're going to die Bounty Hunter!" the Jumal yelled, and ran up to Bounty Hunter. Bounty Hunter lifted his sword, and tried to block the attacks, but they came too swiftly and he got hit. Bounty Hunter started to flee. "Zomus, I've got a problem!" Bounty Hunter yelled through his ear phone. "What is it Bounty Hunter?" Zomus asked. "Another Jumal, same color as Max, but he has green eyes and black hair." Bounty Hunter said, and looked back. The Jumal was still chasing him. "NO! That can't be he's dead." Zomus screamed. "Who is it?" Bounty Hunter asked. "His name is Kaiden." Zomus said. "HELP ME!" Bounty Hunter yelled. "I'm on my way." Zomus said. Kaiden followed Bounty Hunter up a hill, and into a sand pass. "You're going to die." Kaiden said. Bounty Hunter lifted his sword, "Not today." Kaiden ran towards him and slid on his knees. Bounty Hunter tried to decapitate him, but he was to slow, and Kaiden stabbed him in the chest. As Bounty Hunter fell Kaiden stood up. From behind Kaiden heard footsteps. "Zomus." Kaiden said, and turned. "Kaiden." Zomus said. "I can kill you." Kaiden said, and lifted his sword. "No, you're not the warrior." Zomus said. "That is only if you believe it... I don't." Kaiden rushed Zomus, and cut his arm. Zomus laughed and turned, "You see, no damage." "Oh yeah, look at your arm." Kaiden said. Zomus looked at his arm, and saw that it was bleeding. "IMPOSSIBLE!" Zomus yelled. "Very possible." Kaiden said. The two locked swords and glared at each other. Zomus kicked Kaiden down onto the ground, and tried to stab him, but Kaiden rolled, and grabbed Zomus's blade. Kaiden used it as support to thrust himself at Zomus. Zomus took a step back and the two came running at each other again. "Last time you killed me you got lucky." Kaiden said. "I know." Zomus said. Kaiden tried to stab Zomus but Zomus blocked, and tried to cut Kaidens arm off. Kaiden simply rolled under Zomus and almost stabbed him in the heart. But something stabbed Kaiden first. "Pay back's a bitch." Bounty Hunter said. Zomus turned and laughed, "You only have a few minutes left of your second life, and you can only do one thing, kill me, or kill Bounty Hunter." "How do I kill Bounty Hunter." Kaiden asked. "In the heart." Zomus replied. Kaiden turned, and stabbed Bounty Hunter in the heart, he even pulled it and, and sliced it until it couldn't be cut any more. "Good bye Kaiden." Zomus said. Kaiden turned, and tried to stab Zomus, but disappeared before he could. Zomus called up Blackheart and asked if she could make another Bounty Hunter. "Sir, give me six months and yes I can, but not right now." Blackheart replied. "Fine, call it quits, I'm gonna follow these brats, they'll take me to this warrior." Zomus said, and waited for them to start moving.

When Max regains conscience, he saw Hauntzor and TJT holding him. "That was close Max." Hauntzor said. "Yeah I know... I almost died." Max said. The three of them watched the sun slowly drop between the hills. "Hey son." Kaiden said, and appeared next to Max. "Dad?" Max asked. "Yeah, I figured with the last of my visits, I'll talk to you in person for once." Max smiled, tears streaming down his face, "That's nice of you Dad." "This sword," Kaiden said, unsheathing his sword, "Is very powerful; Luna and that new sword for the Paladin have already fused together." "So you mean I'm without another good sword?" Max asked. "You need a strong one, the battles your going to face will require you to have a sword forged of the strongest metal on Planet J." Kaiden said. "Planet J?" Max questioned. "That's where I come from; I'll tell you more about it later." Kaiden said, "All you need to worry about is finding that warrior." Max nods, and gets up, "What's its name?" Max asked, pointing to the sword. "I've called it Protector." Kaiden said. "Protector it is." Max said, and lifted it up. It felt like what all swords should feel like, and extended arm. "Bye Max." Kaiden said. "Bye Dad." Max said. The two tried to hug each other, but Kaiden disappeared before they could even touch. "We need to keep moving, the faster the better." Max said, TJT and Hauntzor agreed. They all got on their Extreme Gear, and flew off towards their next destination.

Zomus looked at his map, "Max is on the move." Blackheart looks at him, "How do you know this?" "I planted a tracking bug on Kaidens sword, so I will always be prepared when Max and his friends come in for an attack." Zomus said, and started laughing.

Kaiden and Max's Mom, Alisha, were walking back towards their window to watch Max. "When will you use your second life, Alisha?" Kaiden asked. "I may never use it my love, I couldn't handle living without you." Kaiden laughed, "You are a sweetheart." "I can't believe that the Bounty Hunter killed you." Alisha said, and started to shake with anger. "It's ok... I made the mistake." The two looked at each other. "I'm so proud of Max." Alisha said, and tears started to steam down her face. "I know." Kaiden said. They watched Max and his friends Berlin, oblivious of what they were about to face.
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I had to restart, then I procrstinated, so I thought *yesterday* today was the last day of May... Time started... 3:30 p.m. Time completed... 1:08 a.m., how many words written under 24 hours? 6155... Yeah, that's what's up. So... yeah bye.
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Let's keep the ball rolling!

When they mention school, I think it would be cool if you played that up some. For example, they could either make a joke how little school seems when compared to fighting the Big Bad or, in contrast, how eager they might be to have a normal life again. Just something to hook the reader, you know?

You know, I know the Whip was a bad guy, but ouch...just ouch.

'Little did they know that behind them was an enemy that would become the fiercest some foe that they have ever faced.': This line seemed kinda random since you normally write lines like these. At least, not that I can remember. You might want to think about just cutting the POV of the hunter.

So, Kaiden and Alisha have appeared in the story. I wonder what role they'll play.

Anyway, nice chapter. Just some minor things, but you can get those with a rewrite. Also, your writing is a lot better and I can't wait to see the more recent chapters of your story. A lot going on right now, but you seem to be doing a good job of shifting between the storyline of the different people.

Anyway, good chapter and later!


P.S.: One word: Bastran?! (Was not expecting that one)